一一向前冲

    我是看了仙剑奇侠三的徐长卿才喜欢上霍建华的，我觉得他演的道士演得就那么到位呀，那眼神感觉好忧郁。比如在我看到他舍不得“青儿”，看着襁褓里的青儿，自言自语，傻笑的时候，我真的就那么的感动，感动得想哭。还有他和紫萱约着去喝忘情水时表现，我也觉得很到位。
   纯粹是为了他，我才看的“一一向前冲”。但是看完后回顾下来，感觉总缺少点味道。似乎他没有把人物的性格体现得完美。曹砚在片中应该定位为一个有点脾气，有时不太体贴人的人。但是看了片子后，我没体会到那种“脾气”，即使在他骂人，发脾气的时候，我也没从骨子中感受到那份“脾气”，仿佛是在念台词。
    而且，我从头到尾，我没有体会到他对“一一”的那份喜欢的感觉。虽然戏中安排他喜欢一一，但是我觉得他没有令观众体会到这一点。
    其他配角我觉得都各有出彩的地方，马路在很多地方演得都不错。但是好像整个片子的感情戏都欠缺一点出彩的地方。马路与上官燕的爱情，我感觉演得也是很突兀，也没有表现出两人相爱的感觉。
   总之，整个片子就是缺乏点感人的感觉，好像就是为了演“相爱”而去演，为了演“脾气大”而去发脾气。
   

    Through the nearly two days, from the evening of Friday to the noon of Sunday, I, as a university student, was deeply captivated by a TV series called “yi yi, go forward fearlessly” (I translate it myself, so you possess a large probability to give a better one).
   Thinking of all the TV series I watch in the last one years, they never impacted me so strong and enchanted me so sheer like this one; and It kept me, all the way, appreciating every details of every scenarios of it without speeding the play, which I did continuously for other TV series .Even though the classmates around me may consider it is waste of time, I want to shout out aloud that it is not a time idle, conversely a absolutely worthy act in which I gained utterly.
    The most reasonable explanation for my being fascinated is that, every scene and each part of the TV series is exquisitely sketched and daintily conceived. Therefore when I was absorbed by the conversation, act and countenance, an inscrutable fear occurred to me that if I missed some of it, I would commit a total loss.
    Tasting it made me feel like tipping a cup of condensed coffee that is so special and expanse that I fail to control myself to compare it to a miniature of the world. If you can try to hear the word of it and put yourself in it, you will be taught about what is life, what is love and, more deep and practical, what pose you should take when you confront with the worldly world.
    In this TV series, the earthly love doesn’t itch your eyes like almost all other ones of the same kinds, and it probed into the minds of modern city people and excavated their souls; in other words, it main theme is not only love of a flock of young mans and women, but also the commonly faced difficulties of modern people, materialistic or mental. In this TV series, the concrete life of broadcast station is presented lively and explore the slow process of finding true love and in this way, it poses a serious problem pertinent to all human kind “what is love?”“love is something that you marry with the one whose life trajectory meet yours at only one point and then go in two different directions ?” “love is something of impulse? When you feel love to a woman, can you be sure you can love it all your life and your two life trajectory will go in one line all the time?” Just like the love between Zhen Liu and Yan Cao in which they undoubtedly have memorable love, nevertheless they still broke up; Just like Chengjun Zhang and yi yi in which they keep the love relation for many years, and they are both excellent and good in character, but the love ended up with total failure. What is love?
   Let’s reload the memorable scenes of TV series.
  Smiles:
       1.When Yan Cao started his car and want to leave, yi yi ,who is angry at that Yan Cao owned a car, lie completely upon the front lid of his car to stop him.
       2.When Yan Cao waited at the bottom of the building where yi yi lives, yi yi quickly get out of bed and runned to him, and then questioned “I dou’t want to go out with you”, however, Yan Cao having penetrated yi yi’s heart, smiled “aren’t you yourself want to go with me”
  Surprises:
       1.When Yan Cao said to yi yi at a pub “ I am the very ‘breeze.’”, yi yi laughed loudly “ can you be him? It is a really amazing joke.”
    2. When yi yi came to office of thief executor of 1088 to register for work and saw Yan Cao, she was taken aback and stood speechlessly.
    Tears:
      1.When yi yi watched Yan Cao hugged Zhen Liu at the gala, her tears flowed.
      2.When yi yi helped Aidi Wang to search the material for her contest, Aidi Wang, obviously for yi yi is her rival, changed her attitude towards yi yi suddenly. Yi yi’s heart was sheer broken. (Aidi Wang stabbed yi yi exactly into the heart, yi yi regarded Aidi Wang as her true friend, but she hurt her just because of the very rival.
    Yes, yi yi may be not the beauty, and she is ordinary young woman like many others who will watch films with her boyfriend. Nonetheless after she lose all of these over the night, she decides not to choose suicide and she does know she still can eat, thus she eats up a table of cakes of different shapes, which you may think it is amazing, but I want to argue actually yi yi wants to prove even though she is heart-broken , all the happening tells her a lesson and she will not be beaten down so easily. Despite all of the adversaries life bestows her, yi yi still believe in true love and doesn’t change her helpful and love-filled world view.
    Yi yi owns a crystal heart that will shine and flare in the eyes of ones who know what is life and what is love. This is clearly and conspicuously evidenced when all his enemies become her friends actually and actuary. In addition, Maybe yi yi doesn’t know how to make up herself and always dresses herself with a fat frock, an uncombed hair and an awkward boot, however her double-braided hair and unpretentious garment symbolize the primer and unaffected beauty and undisputedly more pretty.
    One being optimistic doesn’t denote he doesn’t have unhappiness and setbacks, mostly they will cry in their heart like yi yi. At this time, yi yi will expose grieve and sorrow to her friends, just like to Yan Cao, when Yan Cao is astonished to find yi yi, a commonly recognized optimistic one, still have unspeakable pains. It is true that when one unmasks his pain to you, don’t dislike it, as this usually means he regards you as a true friend and needs to consolate him, and the god bestows you a true friendship.
     The TV series depicts the throughout process of love, when you come along with her for some time, you find yourself seeing her more often, thinking about her thoughtlessly and fascinated by her character, until one day your life is perturbed so turbulent that you find you must show your hands to her. However, I still have a little doubt about Yan Cao that albeit he is a good man, but his several love relation before yi yi influenced my judgement that he will love yi yi all his lifetime. Does he know what is love?
      Another knowledge I get from the TV series is that the love between two must be base on something that can go through the ordeal of time, such as character charm. When I heard “ I love the very you, but not the money”, I couldn’t say how sham the word is. When time changed, the only thing that can keep love is character attraction.
      The TV series is sporadically embellished with timely humorous atmosphere, meaningful words and earnest conversations. Along with the mellifluous and soulful violin as background music, you will slowly lost in the concocted world and relate to the true meaning of life.
      The last word I want to say is that yi yi is perfect for her unaffected double braids, for her innocent smile, for her perseverant character.

导演，你敢让刘真更难看点吗？虽然“前女友”不一定非得是美女才能让男主角念念不忘，但问题是男主角长得太好看了，两人在一起很违和你晓得吧？还有，导演你敢多准备几套服装，敢让曹砚不要总穿同一条裤子吗？

以上为吐槽，现在切入正题。

虽然几天前我偶然因为《怪侠一枝梅》中了招，但看完《一一向前冲》后，我立马把离歌笑抛到了脑后。跟曹砚相比，离歌笑太飘渺了，古装剧，观众代入感难免差了一些。《怪侠一枝梅》属于我喜欢的那种人物结构——一个大佬，手下几个性格鲜明的活宝下属，一起满世界的晃悠着干点伸张正义的事情，比如木村大神的《Hero》还有天海女王的《Boss》。当然还得有些暧昧情愫贯穿始终，内地剧在感情戏上不会像日剧那么“无耻”地吊人胃口，最后一般都会给出明确结局，所以燕三娘那么理直气壮的说句“谁让你是我的人”。大概是集体创作的缘故，《怪侠一枝梅》里各个段落精彩度参差不齐，比如那位“公子我喜欢”君就让人印象深刻，而有的段落又让人忍不住快进。两相比较，《一一向前冲》的剧情则是层层推进，令人投入。不过，谢芒的许多戏份我还是快进了……呃……
 
谁叫我外貌协会的呢？所以看《一一向前冲》时，看小霍的戏份就格外用心。我的感受，曹砚这个角色的融入度太好了，你看着他，完全不会想到他是台湾演员。虽然第一集乍一听配音还有点不适应，但是渐渐会觉得肢体、表情和语言三者相当match，恰到好处，以致把配音这件事完全忘记。虽然《一一向前冲》还是可以划到偶像剧里头，但是此剧胜在平实，电台故事线和主角感情线都很精彩，且互相推动。当然配角也功不可没啦，像上官燕、马路、西蒙、正太罗阳都可谓光芒四射。郑佩佩演的田医生虽然戏份不很多，但是那个气质和感觉真是很不错啊。至于童蕾，自从听到她在《亮剑》里像背书一样说台词后，我就一直对其演技抱有怀疑。前面几集，周一一跟马路做节目时，那个台词说的还是不好，后面慢慢好点，最后一集跟曹砚搭档那段，已算比较自然，但离角色设定的粉丝成群的属性好像还是有些远啊。

说了这么多，其实都是铺垫，目的当然是引出小霍啊！有几场戏印象深刻。

第9集，周一一在田医生诊所吻了曹砚后，曹砚的那种受到惊吓不知所措略带懊恼的反应很好玩。

22集里，配完广告后，周一一、西蒙、曹砚三人在茶座里聊天，周一一和西蒙坐在一起，曹砚坐在西蒙的对面，西蒙吹捧曹砚后，说周一一，以后有那么好的机会你也叫上我呗。这句话中间切了一个曹砚的侧45度镜头，其实就是周一一的视线方向。曹砚手机械地轻敲着桌子，头没有动，眼睛却悄悄抬起盯着周一一，随后又垂下。此时，画外的周一一想必在专心听西蒙说话，不会知道有人在注视着她，可是观众却看得一清二楚。接着两人自顾自讨论电台，自顾自地相对而笑，别说西蒙，连我都看不下去。我想曹砚此刻真情流露，连自己都没意识到，否则肯定不会做的那么明显。

24集，周一一决定参加电台达人秀，曹砚跑到类似画廊的地方去找她，周一一离开时，他追出去，叫了一一，如果我没记错，这是剧中曹砚第一次这么叫她，大概也是感情发展的佐证吧。当然这是剧本的功劳。既然说到了，就跑个题夸下剧本。这个剧里前面出现的细节到结尾都呼应了，比如周一一欠曹砚的那支舞（其实看到这里我也已经忘记了）。我尤其喜欢最后一集曹砚问周一一咖啡怎么洗的对话，它让那个拥抱不至于太过煽情而乏味，卸掉了剧情之前一直在积聚的情感压力，曹砚如释重负，观众也能会心一笑。之前看到阳台上飘舞的白T恤时，我心想这剧情要坏，还好，最后T恤并未演变成一个烂俗的定情信物。

还是这一集，谢芒办公室门口，周一一忐忑地问淘汰率，说我不会连海选都通不过吧。曹砚噢了一声，露出一种看穿别人心思后暗暗得意的坏笑。包括后面整一个段落处理的都相当之好，很有趣。“时而自高自大，时而自轻自贱”，这句台词写得还真是挺，精辟的。

24集结尾西蒙到曹砚家喝酒这场戏里，小霍的颜真是美好无比。西蒙说起周一一参赛的事情，曹砚说周一一自己都同意了，我也没阻止她。然后莞尔一笑，说她那个个性啊，不撞南墙是不会回头的。整个对话，曹砚都有些心不在焉，待到西蒙说出原子弹爆炸与核反应堆的比喻时，曹砚更是若有所思。顺便说一句，西蒙最后的嘿嘿一笑真是太贼了。

28集，周一一终于坐到了曹砚旁边的主播台，曹砚歪着头看她说话，下面就是一支舞的段落了。唯独在这一段小霍好像有点回到偶像剧达人模式了，那直勾勾看着周一一的小眼神啊。。。跳完舞后，便是在周一一办公室的对话，这场戏演得也相当好，包括童蕾都没有让我吐槽的念头。“我要听你说。”曹砚说这句时，真tm霸道又深情。等周一一解释完原因，曹砚愣了下，然后是五味杂陈的一笑，刘真当年也是因为同样的原因离开的。镜头切到周一一，然后又切到曹砚，他一声叹息，说我从来没想过，你会想要走。这一整个段落拿捏得都很到位，堪称最高潮场景。至于最后在咖啡馆的正式告别的力度反倒显得没那么强了。周一一不做电话编辑后，曹砚在直播间还是脱口而出叫了周一一的名字。这个场景的末尾，曹砚让观众重复一下刚才的问题，不经意的一个细节充分体现了他的混乱心情，剧本这样安排很巧妙。

梳理了这些个段落后，我认为小霍是实力派。

好了，收起花痴，我要恢复一些理性观众的面目。这个剧其实也有不少狗血桥段，诸如男一在女二前男友面前假充现男友啦，女一目睹男一和前女友卿卿我我而黯然神伤啦，男一在得知女一离开时飞奔机场啦等等等等，不过好在处理的都不矫情。何况，在外貌协会会员眼里剧情一切硬伤基本都是可以容忍的。但是，在这段爱情里，周一一还是太卑微了，还是要靠男人去做她的导师，说你要自我啊，这样才会有人爱啊。如若男人始终高高在上，不去眷顾她，她还是只能一走了之，等着男人来追。真的追来了，那套我要换个环境过不一样的生活的说辞立刻抛到九霄云外，那这个决定还有什么意义？也可能周一一是以退为进吧。我不知道。

夜里两点，我看完全剧，花痴完毕，神清气爽去睡觉。第二天一早醒来，面对着破旧现实。作为一个S女预备役人士，我不会傻到去幻想将来有这么一个玉树临风眉清目秀英俊潇洒的才俊在等着我。所以，我又何必去说周一一呢？茫茫人海，假若真碰到一个人，恐怕卑微也是值得的。

没想到为这部剧我写了那么长，看来花痴的力量果然是无穷的。写了，记了，也就可以慢慢忘了。

最后，再特别提下西蒙的那句话——高潮时享受工作，低潮时享受生活。明日回京，2012，向前冲吧。

PS:最近听说小霍被于正拐去演令狐冲，唉，看他在湖绿古装剧和狗血民国剧里打转转，真真觉得可惜啊……

虽然女主的服饰发型我无法容忍，但是童蕾是漂亮的。霍建华和饰演马路的男演员是我看此剧的最初动力。此剧是温情的，真实的，让人感动的，给人希望的。主角们的生活和我是如此的相似，白天在写字楼，周末约会就电影，打球，餐馆，还有麦当劳的拥挤。一一的工作上不顺心，感情上纠结，我都恍惚觉得那是自己的某些侧面反映。看这部电视剧时候，正好自己也遭遇了一些不顺心，看着它，心里平静，温暖，也告诉自己，今天不开心只是今天，不开心会消散在明天。

虽说 被大家标榜为中国版的“金三顺”，但我还是觉得此剧算得上是特别真诚的，不再疯狂洒狗血。人物也不再单调，虽说有主配角之分，但是每个人物都有各自的特点，并且都以叙述得很真实、全面。即使优质男主也依然有性格缺陷，不再是一味的高富帅，给人以真实感。可见编剧（或者说原著作者）的功力。

整部剧我基本上都是以欢乐的心情看下来的，但就在最后的十几分钟里：

马路说：“迪杜乖，不要叫了！”
曹砚惊问：“你叫它什么？”
马路说：“迪杜~怎么了？”
曹砚恍然大悟：“我的狗也叫迪杜！”

的时刻，我居然没忍住，泪崩了，当时着实出乎我预料呀。估计也是因为觉得男女主角的爱情实属得来不易。

最让我体会深刻的是曹砚的一句话：“一个没有自我的人是没有人爱的”。